Good push
Good hustle. Good effort. Sounds to me like your blooming and getting familiar with your style and composition. You are one who deserves to be recognized unlike these other dudes who have gold songs who can't even make a good song. I am really confused with the newgrounds' taste with music, quite frankly, I am also concerned.
Dude
This is someone who actually deserves a review. I am sick of these people who get gold tracks for being amateurs in fruityloops. I can tell that you spent time mastering this audio and fitting the progressions together. Nice mix.
ty very much, i appreciate your review!
yes i spend endlesshours mastering my songs even somtimes they dont turn out how i wish they would..
Yo
Keep it up
If i didnt know you i would be blinking my eyes in the suprise of you saying keep it up and giving me a 4, but thats ok anyways. Thanks for the review.
Wow
Stop while you can buddy
need improving...
the lead guitar doesn't fit the song at all and the bassline is alright. Drums need some work as well but definitely change that first lead guitar and when the second one drops to lower chords man.
ReView...
I don't like the kick, I think its too distorted for the song. I like the rest though except when the bass line comes in, might be a bit too sudden.
I didn't use any kickers, but there may have been one in the drum beat I used.
Liking this...
I like this because it's your own style and you felt it as you composed.
Honestly...
Nice shift and pattern cuts with the beat. The only thing I didn't like which is a big factor to me, is you took the same pattern from Ambience Outburst and just elongated it. Its good that you were influenced and admire that pattern because it is an awesome pattern, but it's been done before. That instrument was prett whack that you used for it as well... just sounded like you pasted it in a 3xOSC or made a horrible TS404 you get me?
Things to improve...
RAP, don't talk. The term spitting lyrics isn't found in your raps. You need more emotion when you are rapping. Anyone can talk but not a lot of people can rap. When you see people on stage, you see them spitting rhymes so hard that they are sweating and their neck veins are bulging out. That is rapping. When you see rappers at an interview talking to the interviewer, that is talking, that is what you are doing. Feel it, live it, learn from it. It makes a difference... trust me. By the way, increase the music and decrease your lyrics volume a bit.
Thats the worst review I have got on that track...but of course the other reviews where on an auchual music site.
What to improve...
Background voices are for the background, not to distort the foreground. I felt that I found myself paying more attention to the distorted "Uh's" and SFX. If you don't have the money for a PreAMP and a good MIC then I recommend getting an Audio Utility and making some balances. By balancing I mean lower the background noises and maybe add FX to them (panning, chorus's, reverbs, etc...) and the Lyrics are fine the way they are, thats a good volume for them. Rapping is hard but you will get better at it. I thought the lyrics were okay but that doesn't matter as much as the balancing does. The music was at the volume that the background FX should have been at so try increasing the volume with the music so that way it blends with the lyrics and that would make it flow together. So this is what you need to do...
Keep the rapping at the same level as is.
Increase the volume of the music.
Decrease the volume of the background fills and add FX to them.
I'll agree with that, Many of my critics talk about the sound quality...
Hey guys, my buddy (namoroso) and I have been on and off composing music since 2003. We are working our hardest to produce new songs/loops. Thanks to all who have commented and helped us out.
Age 39
Joined on 7/19/04
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