Good push
Good hustle. Good effort. Sounds to me like your blooming and getting familiar with your style and composition. You are one who deserves to be recognized unlike these other dudes who have gold songs who can't even make a good song. I am really confused with the newgrounds' taste with music, quite frankly, I am also concerned.
Dude
This is someone who actually deserves a review. I am sick of these people who get gold tracks for being amateurs in fruityloops. I can tell that you spent time mastering this audio and fitting the progressions together. Nice mix.
ty very much, i appreciate your review!
yes i spend endlesshours mastering my songs even somtimes they dont turn out how i wish they would..
Yo
Keep it up
If i didnt know you i would be blinking my eyes in the suprise of you saying keep it up and giving me a 4, but thats ok anyways. Thanks for the review.
Wow
Stop while you can buddy
need improving...
the lead guitar doesn't fit the song at all and the bassline is alright. Drums need some work as well but definitely change that first lead guitar and when the second one drops to lower chords man.
ReView...
I don't like the kick, I think its too distorted for the song. I like the rest though except when the bass line comes in, might be a bit too sudden.
I didn't use any kickers, but there may have been one in the drum beat I used.
Liking this...
I like this because it's your own style and you felt it as you composed.
Honestly...
Nice shift and pattern cuts with the beat. The only thing I didn't like which is a big factor to me, is you took the same pattern from Ambience Outburst and just elongated it. Its good that you were influenced and admire that pattern because it is an awesome pattern, but it's been done before. That instrument was prett whack that you used for it as well... just sounded like you pasted it in a 3xOSC or made a horrible TS404 you get me?
Hey guys, my buddy (namoroso) and I have been on and off composing music since 2003. We are working our hardest to produce new songs/loops. Thanks to all who have commented and helped us out.
Age 39
Joined on 7/19/04
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